First Editing Session

So I just finished reading over my first draft, red pen in hand. I didn't change too much, but I sort of expected that. I mean, I did write it. I'm thinking I might have some underdeveloped characters traits and plot points that sort of found their way into the story rather than evolving from events. People love polarity and conflict, metamorphosis too. It's not that the characters stay the same throughout the film, its just that they don't become that different. Maybe they need to. I'll have to wait until my other readers give some feedback. I've learned that it isn't easy being your own critic. I think I'm just too nice to give myself the tough love I need. We'll see though. Maybe its that good already, no changes necessary! I never thought I'd say it, but it was tough keeping this baby under 130 pages. As unepic as possible, I knew that I didn't have a "Gone With The Wind" on my hands. That means a reasonable running time. I bet I can get it down some. Probably should.